Today John woke me up early, because "there is something that
you might want to see". It turned out to be the sunrise. We sat in front
of his house and watched the sun rise over the trees. Here is what it looked
like:
Today he said that we were going to see the medical
clinic that he had started in his home village. He showed me around the clinic. While I
was at the clinic I met Dr. Reed. He was very friendly and welcoming.
John said that the clinic had just been started up recently. He told me about
how he raised money for the clinic. He also told about how before the civil
war, life was good and everything was okay. But then the civil war came, and
the country never really came back from that war. John said that he thought
clinics to help keep people healthy was the only way to get the country back on
track for recovery from the war. After we had visited the clinic, we just
walked around town, and I took it all in. When we saw things that were new to
me, John explained. We came upon one woman who appeared to be cooking
milk. I asked John why she was doing that, and he told me that she was making
Pluumata. He said that it is a food -- a spicy mix of herbs, pickled vegetables
and milk (usually goat's milk). That night John made me Herisa for dinner. It
is another type of vegetable stew. John put some sweet spices on his, but I
didn't like the smell of them so I didn't.
2 comments:
I love how you go into character development for everyone
"there is something you might like to see"-I like that beginning...good link to clinic...great conversation about the clinic and the war...Pluumata...Herisa...sorry you didn't like the spices.
Great visit with John, Zane. I really like how you relay conversations you had in your visit. I only wish you could had stayed longer.
One little thing. You are a fine writer. The words you use to build your story are so interesting. Occasionally, you have a misspelling or missed bit of punctuation. Your words deserve one more polish before they get published. A second set of eyes could do that polish in minutes.
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